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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；作者高级词汇量积累不足，部分单词有拼写错误。
Dear Anna I really appreciate your promise to look after my sweertheart, Angeral when I leave for china. for your convience to arrangement, I'd like to tell you something about her habit. Like all the five years olds child, Angeral really fond of sweet food, but please don't give her to much candies or icecream, and when you cook please don't add chill or something else which is spicy. I really gratitude for your kindness. By the way, when I leave to china ,It's summer holiday, Angeral don't need to go to school, but I registered her to an pino lesson with a pinoist who just leve in your community at Buliding 5, she'll have lessons twice a week at 5:00pm 7:00pm Monday and Thuesday, I wish you could pick her up when I leave. If every thing goes smoothly , I will be back at April 5th, then I will pick her up at 5:00pm, and if you buy anything to her let me pay the bill later. yours Gunther
