正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;语言不流畅。
Memo To: Mary Chen Date: December 23,2008 From: Li Ming It’s the time for you to help me. In a few days we welcome to New year's, Our company will hold a party, I can't discuss the company's new year's Eve get-together with you as to I'm on a business trip to Beijing for a week tomorrow. It is up to you to decide on party's date, place and the required preparations. Thank you very much.