注意:
1. 短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数; 2. 词数:100左右
3. 参考词汇:生动的vivid;智慧intelligence语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者用词生动多样,请继续努力,请仔细检查单词拼写。
With the development of the internet technology,At present,chatting online is a popular meaning of the comunication. And also the young people create a variaty of the internet words which are vivid and humourous ,such as GG, MM and Xia Mi. In my opinion,Althought the internet laguage reflects the human being's intelligence,Even it representitives the laguage trending, we should not write them on our articles.Because the internet Slang can not express the idea of the article,Even more it destroys our traditional curture which have been developed for several thousands years.We can use them in daily life, It should be forbidden in our comprehation.