2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I will invite my friend go to the shixiang lake of my hometown. This is a very beautiful lake in my hometown. There is a old history about shixiang lake, some cute elephant went to the lake and stay here turn into stone to protect this place. And this place got peace becouse this elephant .