3.Give your comments
句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨。
Higher education is a good investment. It is known to all of us that Science is the first productive force during the development of mankind. In order to make china become stronger and our life better, we all need to arm ourselves with newest science and technology. Recently, many newspapers report that some college graduates work as butchers, night men, dustmen etc. So some people wonder that whether higher education is a good investment. In my opinion, higher education is definitely a good investment. First, our country needs scientists and engineers to be stronger and richer. Second, living in such a competitive world, we all want to success and live better than others. With the knowledge you learn, you can realize your dream easier than others. Third, a wise man said that college is not just about study, the more essential is that you learn how to learn, how to think, how to become a wiser. When you realize that, you can do better than others and success in your field even you work as butchers, night men, dustmen. Your life will be as colorful as other elites in other fields.