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2012年10月27日雅思大作文真题:广告到底能不能影响人们的消费

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:56浏览次数:6924
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题目要求:

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解:

题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。

广告使人们都看上去一样,也就是广告的宣传效应会影响人们的消费行为 manipulate people's buying behaviour然后掀起一些特定品牌的时尚create fashion。也就是去写广告的影响力会使一些brands垄断市场monopolise the market。
但是广告其实并不会使人们都一样,我们不能低估人们对于产品质量和个人喜好的理性underestimate people's rationality to products quality and the influence of personal preference.
这么一分析,还是我们说的广告经典题,广告到底能不能影响人们的消费!
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可适当增加几条从句;作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累还不够,拼写错误也要注意;全文结构较为严谨。

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Dear Karter and SusanT Thank you very much for the invation to your wedding . Unfortunatelly , I won't be able to atten. The reason, I am pleased to say that is my wife Sue is pregmant, and the baby is due more or less on the day of your wedding! Although Sue said It will be alright for me come over along. I feel it's the least I could do as a husband, that is to be aside and take care of her till the babay arrives. We are both hoping It'll be a girl and plan to name her Backy, after her grandmother. but if it's a boby, we plan to name her Franky, by no particular meaning expect that we both like the name. Anyway I would like to wish you both long and happy life together and hope to come to see you after Sue is well enough Have a wonderful day and don't forget to send us some photographs. yours Gunther and Sue

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