小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend who is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is nice. She is good at singing. She not only has a very charming outlook but also is very clever. She likes reading books, playing computer games and chess. Besides, She is very kind. She often helps us. Our classmates like her very much.