2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；请注意分段。

Many museums are open to public and more and more people start visiting museum However,it is also brought many unexpected problems First,some people don't take care of the facilities because they like touching them Second,people throw rubbish casually.it is the worst things what they to do Third,If a fire broke out in museums,a lot of people can't escape quickly In my opinion,Free admission is a good policy for the public,and it brings the public much convenience.But it brings a lot of unnecessary consequences.so we need to protect our cultural relics and should not damage by people