小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

I have a good friend who is a beautiful and clever girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is nice. She is good at singing. She not only has a very charming outlook but also is very clever. She likes reading books, playing computer games and chess. Additionally, She is overwhelmingly kind. She often helps us. So all of our classmates like her very much.