从句使用不熟练,注意在平时练习中多加积累;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;全文结构较为严谨。
I have a good friend who is a beautiful and clever girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth , all of which form a charming outlook. Besides, her voice is nice. She is good at singing and can sing well. She not only has a very charming outlook but also is very clever. She likes reading books, playing computer games and chess. Additionally, she is overwhelmingly kind. She often helps us. Therefore all of our classmates like her very much.