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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36953
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分63.0分
评语:

从句使用不熟练,注意在平时练习中多加积累;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

I have a good friend who is a comely and clever girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth , all of which form a charming outlook. Besides, her voice is very delightful. She is good at singing and can sing well. She is more than charming but also is extremely clever. She is fond of reading books, playing computer games and chess. Additionally, she is overwhelmingly kind. She often helps us. Therefore all of our classmates like her very much.

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