文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文中衔接词丰富。
I have a good friend who is a comely and clever girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth , all of which form a charming outlook. Besides, her voice is more than delightful. She is good at singing and can sing extremely well. She not only has a charming outlook but also is very clever. She is fond of reading books, playing computer games and chess. Additionally, she is overwhelmingly kind. She often helps us. Therefore all of our classmates like her very much.