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I believe that majority of people have same thoughts that it is not invisible to draw a conclusion immediately when they see something or listen something.Conclusions without dedibrate thinking often lead to bad influence. If we easily give a conclusion to somebody, it may change our minds and hurt he or she.When we are aware that we are wrong, the fact that we hurt them will never change.In addition, If we simply draw a conclusion to something, we can not correct know the essence of things. From my perspective. we should have ourselves judgements and understand the truths.
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