作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;文中较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇量仍需积累;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
From my standpoint that majority of characters have the same thoughts that it is not invisible to draw a conclusion immediately when they see something or listen something. Conclusions without dediberating often lead to harmful influence. If we easily give a conclusion to somebody, it may change our minds and hurt he or she.When we are aware that we are wrong, the fact that we hurt them will never transform. In addition, if we simply draw a conclusion to something, we can not correctly know the essence of things. From my perspective, we should have ourselves judgements and understand the truths.
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