作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
From my standpoint that majority of characters have the same thoughts that it is not invisible to draw a conclusion immediately when they see something or listen something. Conclusions without deliberating often lead to harmful influence. Provided that we easily give a conclusion to somebody, it may shift our minds and hurt he or she. When we are aware that we are wrong, the fact that we hurt them will never transform. Additionally, if we simply draw a conclusion to something, we can not know the essence of matters. From my perspective, we should have ourselves judgements and understand the truths.
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