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For most of us, we are too naive to complete significant events that make us be famous within the history. in my opinion, we should be unpretentious and moderate to study and learn in our daily life. hence, as the sentence showed on the paper :do small things in a great way. all the important things is associated by bust things. so, if we want finish the the most emergency affair, we should preoccupation ourselves into the inconclusive event. there is a motto that it is apparent a long period: there is nothing be useless unless you are careless. if we want build by ourselves, we should pay more attention to small things. hypothetically we may arrive a undisbutable conclusion that small stream collect to be a river.
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