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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12893
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Chatting on the Internet is increasing popularity with the public. But I think it will never take the place of communicating in the reality. In modern society, the phenomenon of young people relying on chatting on the Internet is getting more and more serious. Is this a good thing? I don't think so. In the picture, the young is so fascinated with the computer that ignoring her parents. If a man don't communicate with others around,how terrible it is! If thing goes on like this, she might be lonely and anxious. As we all know, a man who has no friend will not live healthily in this world. So, try walking out the virtual world and embracing reality.

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