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mother is a person who is almost the most essitention guy in everyones ' life。lt is also to me。l would like to elaberate my thanks on my mom。 in the first，she is my harbour that no matter what l am happy or sad，she always tells me how to do better。Like two years ago ，I lost in a badminton match which I thought I would be number one。So I frustrated all the day。It was this days'afternoon that mom told me“You are not good enough that there are always someone who are better than you.What you can do is that learning from the losing and getting stronger.Rather you will always be a loser. ”i have become stronger day by day.Secondly,there is no denying that she is my goal that I need to learn to how to be a nice man. There is no doubt that mom serves as a most important person in my life.I think the best way to express my thanks is that make she pound of me ,which I try to do all the time.
