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中考考前作文集中训练附范文18:如何保持健康

发布时间:2014-05-29 17:58浏览次数:547
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身体健康是我们每个人的追求,如何保持健康,是我们共同探究的问题。请以“如何保持健康”为题,写一篇短文。80词左右。

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可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Recently we've made a survey of sky English club. Here are the results.We find that fifty­one percent of the students want to practice their spoken English by using Internet.Twenty­five percent like watching English movies,which can make their holiday life better.Eighteen percent would like to read more English classics because they are interested in them.Six percent hope that they can learn more foreign culture,such as good manners and Western festivals. As far as I know,it's very helpful to improve English by learning English songs.Maybe we can invite foreigners to introduce good ways to learn songs.I'm sure all of us will have fun in the sky English club.

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