文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中很少出现过渡词和衔接词。
Looking_back_at_the_past_few_years,my_parents_have_done_a_lot_for_me.On the one hand,they took good care of me.My parents always cooked delicious food for me.They tried to help me out whenever I had problems.On the other hand,my parents were strict in my study.They encouraged me to study hard at all subjects.With their help,I could make progress. From now on,I will share some housework and care more about them.If I have free time,I will communicate better with them.And I will do my best to work hard to have a bright future.I believe I won't let them down.