中考考前作文集中训练附范文18:如何保持健康

作者词汇基础扎实；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

Everyone has his/her dream.The one who never gives up can achieve his/her goal.Ma Yun is a very good example.He lived a hard life when he was young.To make a living，he used to do many part­time jobs.He was often tired but he never gave up his dream.He followed his dream.In the end，he created Alibaba and changed hundreds of millions of people's lives. My dream is to be a teacher.I'll work hard from now on and get good grades in my study.I won't give up my dream.I think it will come true soon.