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My Dream Hi Everyone has their own dream. No mater who wants to be a teacher, be a doctor or be an engineer. They all is a symbol of our life. My dream is be a teacher who is good at math, physics and chemistry. The mean reason is that I like then. And I think let students be better is a symbol of honour. I'll work hard from now on and get good grades in my study. I won't give up my dream. I think it will come true soon.