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I get up early in today morning,after bearkfast ,i helped mother to does houseworke,then,i finished my homework ,the homework is very easy,so i finished it very soon.afternoon,i palyed Table tennis with my firend ,we are very happly of this.,at night,i watched TV with my parents in the living room。 what busy of this day