作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;文章衔接手法恰当;复杂句采用很棒。
The phenomenon of excessive packaging of goods now prevailing in our society: clothes wrapped in paper, water packed in a beautiful bottle, place the fruit in the basket, even people were put on the clothes... There are several causes of excessive packaging. The first reason is that a large number of companies believe that they can attract customers' attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. On the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging. In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill. To solve the problem, it's necessary to take the following measures. First, laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies. In addition, we need to raise consumer's awareness that excessive packaging don't equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling