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作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；复杂句采用很棒；全文结构较为严谨。
The phenomenon of excessive packaging of goods now prevailing in our society: clothes wrapped in paper, water packed in a beautiful bottle, place the fruit in the basket, even people were put on the clothes... There are many reasons for the excessive packaging. On the one hand, many companies believe they can attract the attention of customers, so that customers are more likely to buy their products, so as to obtain more profit. On the other hand, many people mistakenly believe that the more exquisite packaging, its quality will be better, so as to encourage excessive packaging. In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill. To solve the problem, it's necessary to take the following measures. First, laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies. In addition, we need to raise consumer's awareness that excessive packaging don't equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling
