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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9786
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
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学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

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The phenomenon of excessive packaging of goods now prevailing in our society: clothes wrapped in paper, water packed in a beautiful bottle, place the fruit in the basket, even people were put on the clothes... There are many reasons for the excessive packaging. On the one hand, many companies believe they can attract the attention of customers, so that customers are more likely to buy their products, so as to obtain more profit. On the other hand, many people mistakenly believe that the more exquisite packaging, its quality will be better, so as to encourage excessive packaging. In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill. In order to solve this problem, the following measures are necessary. First of all, using the law to curb excessive packaging enterprises. In addition, we need to let the consumer's awareness that excessive packaging doesn't equal to high quality, and advocate packaging recycling.

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