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The phenomenon of excessive packaging of goods now prevailing in our society: clothes wrapped in paper, water packed in a beautiful bottle, place the fruit in the basket, even people were put on the clothes... There are many reasons for the excessive packaging. On the one hand, many companies believe they can attract the attention of customers, so that customers are more likely to buy their products, so as to obtain more profit. On the other hand, many people mistakenly believe that the more exquisite packaging, its quality will be better, so as to encourage excessive packaging. In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill. In order to solve this problem, the following measures are necessary. First of all, using the law to curb excessive packaging enterprises. In addition, we need to let the consumer's awareness that excessive packaging doesn't equal to high quality, and advocate packaging recycling.