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Nowaday, online shopping has become a kind of fashion in our daily life. It brings a lot of advantages for us, and convenient is the favorite one. First of all, you can save the time of going to shops, and just check on the internet instead. Besides, it's no more necessary to carry money to pay for your merchandises, paying by online bank will do. Third, taking the goods back with you sometimes is a bothering issue, in that case, online shopping is but too glad to help you out here. What you need to do is just staying at home and waiting for the EXPRESS. Though there are many attractive points about it, disavantages can not be neglected. When shopping online, the pictures,specifications and comments by other buyers of the real products are to be noticed by youselves before products receipt. Therefore, you can not very sure about the qaulity and appearances are as good as you thought. As a matter of fact, online shopping symbolizes the progress of our society to some extent. You should take advantage of it, but you can not be additive. or you may waste your precious time, and lose you rights that you should be given as a consumer sometimes.!
