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With the rapid development of the world economy,people become more and more rich.So does our students.However,though we have more money,we also spend them in every aspects.In this way, we should learn to be a smart consumer.But how?In term of me,I think we should spend our money in a plannde way,not only just blindly save money. First,we had better list the things we want to spend money for,giving up someting we don't really need.By this means,we can save some money and don't worry to eat out with our friends.In my oppinion,the things we bought from group-buy deals are not always very practical.So we should treat this marketing sensibly.But if you want to buy some necessities like toliet paper.The group-buy deals or coupons is also a good choice.Another good method to save money is keep accounts after we buy something,then check the bill every week or every month. The you can konw where does your money go?Next,you will spend money reasonably. Any, It's not easy to earn money,so you'd better save them as much as possible.
