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作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持，也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。
When it comes to the meaningful life, I hardly have actually response to it.As it goes to say that a thousand reader may have a thousand Hamlate.Meanwhile , various stages of age have various opionins. When we were young, we were expected to spend more leisure time chasing with playmate or watching TV, but a few time would be taken on the learning expect for the harder one.As we grow up,more hours may be spent on dating or enjoying the horribel movie or something else, but alway regret not keeping the learning concept to get improved.With time going by,we will become the older and more leisure time will be occupied our life. In addition,we are beginning to plan something we always egear to do.As a result ,we will go west with some regreting. Difficulty as life is , it is life that makes you wake to fight with the trouble condition.When you have pains ,you can remember you are alive.What is the most significant life is doing what you have been desiring,because you have only once experience to taste your life.
