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字数：300 满分：100分
从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；文章组织结构良好；作者要注意增加使用高级词汇，单词拼写做的挺好。
Murābits have many strange creatures, kernel growing two 6.7cm and melon’s radius of 30 cm. If rice and wheat are put down in the cellar, can be keep for decades. In Murābits, the sheep is very tall and have a tail as big as fan. When in spring, the sheep of belly will be cut open, after you can take out dozens of catty suet, and then suture together. If you don’t take out suet, the sheep will die from obesity. People said that Murābits far from Sweden 100km, 3 hour in the sundial. Autumn moonight, suddenly there was a West wind, people and animals if not immediately water and it will die.
