2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式变化多样；作者用词较为灵活，但有较多拼写错误。

my foreign friend jason going to visit my hometown in this week ,i so happy becanse before i gone that him hometown he very fiendly and take me go to there scenic and local food .and this week i will be introduce huangsan for he ,not only the huangsan be famore for china but also it heve china ancine more pomer in there writing pome .after we can tagather to go to the xihu paly the boat i can saying about the xihu beuti love sotry ,that will be fan i began hope this week fatter become.