2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

复杂句采用很棒；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

when my friends from foreign come to my hometown,i would take he to renmingsqueen to see the beautiful sence. as we all know ,with the development of china .there are more and more people from all over the world have to come our country to see the famous place of our country .surely,as my best friend,i need to share the best to him.i will take him to yuanmingyuan ,forbid city,gugon and so on.by the way,i would like to share the nice food with him.as a total local person,i knowed the best food and i will give a good taste to him. come on,i can't to wait your.