2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者应增加从句的使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

when my friends from foreign come to my hometown,i would take he to beijing to see the beautiful seance. as we all know ,with the development of china .there are more and more people from all over the world have to come our country to see the famous place of our country .surely,as my best friend,i need to share the best to him.i will take him to forbid city and so on.by the way,i would like to share the nice food with him.as a total local person,i have konwn the best food and i will give a good taste to him. come on,i can't to wait to your.