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My new teacher is a science teacher. He looks exceedingly strong. For he has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a medium nose. He often wears a new black shirt and a pair of brown pants, and two big shoes. Which makes him look very energetic. My science teacher is extremely friendly. Additionally he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we will have a science class. All of us are happy to have the class. As he is so funny and makes us absorb the knowledge at a relax atmosphere. Who is he? He’s Mr. Zhou.