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小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:32浏览次数:7166
要求:
描述我的新老师。
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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。

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My new teacher is a science teacher. He looks exceedingly strong. For he has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a medium nose. He often wears a new black shirt and a pair of brown pants, and two big shoes. Which makes him look very energetic.    My science teacher is extremely friendly. Additionally he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we will have a science class. All of us are happy to have the class. As he is so funny and makes us absorb the knowledge at a relax atmosphere. Who is he? He’s Mr. Zhou.

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