若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文中高级词汇不足;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
My new teacher is a charming woman who is from Nanjing province. She has a long curly brown hair. Her eyes are big and bright which looks very cute. She has a very beautiful and samll mouth. All of that with a fit body form a charming appearance. She not only has a great outlook but also is a highly-skilled teacher. She is well-informed and good at kindling students' interest in English. She is very kind and caring about students. She puts us under her wing when we need her most. Generally speaking, she is more than a teacher, but a mentor and friend. All what she has done for us wins our love and respect.