小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

从句数量偏少；作者要注意增加使用高级词汇，单词拼写做的挺好；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

My new teacher is a charming woman who is from Nanjing province. She has a long curly brown hair and bright eyes which makes her looks very attractive. Besides, she has a very beautiful and samll mouth. All of that plusing a fit body form a charming appearance. She not only has a great outlook but also is a highly-skilled teacher. She is well-informed and good at kindling students' interest in English. Since she comes and teaches us, many of us have achieved impressed progress. She is extremely kind and caring about students. She puts us under her wing when we need her most. Generally speaking, she is more than a teacher, but a mentor and friend. What she has done for us win our love and respect.