小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；作者词汇量积累不错，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

My new teacher is a charming woman who is from Nanjing province. She has a long curly brown hair and bright eyes which makes her looks very attractive. Besides, she has a very beautiful and samll mouth. All of that plus a fit body form a charming appearance. She not only has a great outlook but also is a highly-skilled teacher. She is well-informed and good at kindling students' interest in English. Since she comes and teaches us, many of us have achieved impressed progress. She is extremely kind and caring about students. She puts us under her wing when we need her most. Generally speaking, she is more than a teacher, but a mentor and friend. What she has done for us win our love and respect.