Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Along with the advance of the society,the people has different salary has become a hot topic. According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics,the people has different degree and different salary.First,the statistics show to us the unemployment of average rate is seven points six percent,and it above the usually level.Second,it show to us the median weekly average earnings is 797,and it lower than the usually level.there are some reason made the phenomenon: first,the society is a new technology area that need a lot of people who has a high knowledge;second,the company perfer to employment the undergraduate,because they think the undergraduate could made the high profit to the company. As far as i concerned,the government should take some measures to change the phenomenon.Such as help some people who has a low degree to get the knowledge,let they have fair to get some job.We should take care of the salary people.