小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

如若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者要注意增加使用高级词汇，单词拼写做的挺好；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

My new teacher is a charming woman who is from Nanjing province. She has a long curly brown hair and bright eyes which make her look very attractive. Besides, she has a very beautiful and small mouth. All of which plusing a fit body form a charming appearance. She not only has a great outlook but also is a highly-skilled teacher. She is well-informed and good at kindling students' interest in English. Since she comes and teaches us, many of us have achieved impressed progress. She is extremely kind and caring about students. She puts us under her wing when we need her most. Generally speaking, she is more than a teacher, but a mentor and friend. What she has done for us win our love and respect.