小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

My new teacher is a charming woman who is from Nanjing province. She has a long curly brown hair and bright eyes which make her look very attractive. Besides, she has a very beautiful and small mouth, and she also has a fit body. She not only has a great outlook but also is a highly-skilled teacher. She is well-informed and good at kindling students' interest in English. Since she comes and teaches us, many of us have achieved impressed progress. She is extremely kind and caring about students. She puts us under her wing when we need her most. Generally speaking, she is more than a teacher, but a mentor and friend. What she has done for us win our love and respect.