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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17436
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
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有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;熟练使用了一些长难句;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

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With the developing of technology,more and more people use computer every day. They use it with work or have fun,but which they use for,it can present computer is important for human at that time. In 19th,the first computer produced,because people needed it to calculate some difficult things,although it is very expensive to made it. after this,computer developed so fast that people can not believe some years later they can use it in their home. because of computer,many companies can earn much money than before .now almost every home have computer, people can use it surfering internat ,they could though news or play computer games or watch movies,they can do anything they want.when they go to work or go to school,they have to learn how to use computer with their work. people realize computer have becamed very important in their life,many people communcate each other by computer ,if one day, computer disappeared,I think it is very teribble

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