语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用。
My good friend is my neighbor, we knew each other since we 3 years old. He very often came to my home to play,so am I. I think we can be good friend until we grow old. Because we like each other personality, so we very often hang out with each other.