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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达，高级词汇的使用也较灵活多样；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；语言不流畅。
from: hubin@163.com Date: dec 25th,2017 to: KPOHsales@hotmail.com subject: to establish business relationship dear sir or woman I kenw your new product no.5670 exhibition held in New york Data on dec 15th to 22th and quite interest in to,please send us a price list and instruction. thank you for your attention, we expction establish business relationship. we are looking forward to your eary reply your sincerely hu bin
