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【题目要求】
A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
【题目分析】
这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。尽量展开想象。注意：不要只说my city，要指出你所在城市的名字， 比如：Beijing, Shanghai等等。人们会喜欢的有：女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围；人们会讨厌的有：交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly);作者词汇表达灵活丰富，希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文章层次较为清晰。
I live in Taian, a tourism city located at Mount Tai. My city has beautiful natural sceneries and a lot of famous places of interest. For example , the sunrise of Mount Tai is very maginificent ,the sea of clouds attracted many tourists. Tha air condition is good in our city, so you can breathe freely and happily. Temple Dai is another well known scenery spot which were acient emperors living places. There are many big shopping malls in Taian, such as Silver Plaza, R T Mart , which are convenient to female customers. Xinhua Bookstores and Wenyou Bookstores are the most favorites places for teenagers. Also, there are lots of parks for the citizens to relax and do exercises.However, in Taian, the public transportation may not very convenient just as Beijing and Shanghai. We have no subway and express bus. The traffic jam in out city is not serious.So you can achieve a fast travel in Taian easily. So I think Jane will like this city.
