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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10391
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

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"It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket." is a proverb vividly showing the relationship between options and risks. What the saying wants to imply is that it is unwise for us to just have one option. A typical case in point is college undergraduate students who are faced with multiple selection,such as finding job,further studying overseas and starting a business. It is our decision and choice that may have a great effect on our life. However,what is of more importance is that we ought to prepare for more than one selections at the same time. Although it is a bit of difficult, it is worth learning more knowledge,read more books, and mastering more skills,because all these would attribute to more possibility to success. To sum up, preparing for more than one choice plays an important role in our life.It not provide us with more selection, but also make us success more possibly.

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