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"It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket." is a proverb vividly showing the relationship between options and risks. What the saying wants to imply is that it is unwise for us to just have one option. A typical case in point is college undergraduate students who are faced with multiple selection,such as finding job,further studying overseas and starting a business. It is our decision and choice that may have a great effect on our life. However,what is of more importance is that we ought to prepare for more than one selections at the same time. Although it is a bit of difficult, it is worth learning more knowledge,read more books, and mastering more skills,because all these would attribute to more possibility to success. To sum up, preparing for more than one choice plays an important role in our life.It not provide us with more selection, but also make us success more possibly.