错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I am so exicted that l hear you will come to visit my hometown.I can't wait to express my welcome to you. I know you enjoy living natural life.So l want to show you around the Jing yue Park when you arrive at my hometown. Jing yue Park is one of famous park in my hometown.It earned the name of scenery of five stars because of its beautiful and unique scenery.A large number of tourists from country and local people visit it every day.There are many rivers,forests,animals and any other plants.What's more,it is far away from center of city.Therefore,you will have a chance to contact closely with nature.It is a good place to relax yourself. In the end,l am looking forward to seeing you soon and have a good time in my hometown.