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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16952
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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I am so exicted that l hear you will come to visit my hometown.I can't wait to express my welcome to you. I know you enjoy living natural life.So l want to show you around the Jing yue Park when you arrive at my hometown. Jing yue Park is one of famous park in my hometown.It earned the name of scenery of five stars because of its beautiful and unique scenery.A large number of tourists from country and local people visit it every day.There are many rivers,forests,animals and any other plants.What's more,it is far away from center of city.Therefore,you will have a chance to contact closely with nature.It is a good place to relax yourself. In the end,l am looking forward to seeing you soon and have a good time in my hometown.

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