小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Rich is my best friend,but he is a dog. he have white and black hair. he is four old years. He like play ball with me every day.we are very happy. we are go to the park ,he also jump into the lake becuse he like swimming very much. we are go to the park three times one week