希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
I have a good friend.She is a pretty girl.She lives in Jiujiang.She is a middle school student.She has big eyes,a small mouth,a small nose and a round face.She is tall and thin.She likes watching TV and playing the basketball.On the weekend,she always plays basketball with her friends in the afternoon and watches TV in the evening. She is a good student.She is good at English.She likes speaking in English.She always reports news in English in her school. She says we are good friends.We often send e-mails to each other everyday.I like her very much.