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Dear Mr. Johnson We have received 3,000piece product from your company , but according to our signing of the No. 35 order. The product quantity should be 3,500 piece , other 500piece we have not received yet. Please check your product list and inform to us. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely,