希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Dear Mr. Johnson We have received 3,000 pieces product from your company, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order. The product quantity should be 3,500 pieces, other 500 pieces we have not received yet. Please check your product list and inform to us. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely,